Wednesday, 10 June 2015

The big wave

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I saw a wide wave. It was drowning me into the deep sea.  The sea water burnt into my eyes. The water was pushing me back like there was a crazy emergency.  I was panicking my way through the wide wave. The wave was like a horror ride,
pushing me up and down. I was searching everywhere for help but I never saw anyone or a boat. This wave was horrible.
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  1. Mrs A16 June 2015 at 21:03

    I was so impressed with this piece of work Denham. You did this all on your own and the sentence..... The sea water burnt into my eyes..... really connected with me. The salty water really does burn your eyes, especially when the surf is big. Great effort.

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  2. Anonymous17 June 2015 at 19:37

    I love your stories and this one is especially an experience you will have such cool memories of your stay in Mangonui school
    Thankyou Mangonui school

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  3. melody jones kara19 June 2015 at 11:38

    nice denham about the big wave

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