Tuesday, 31 May 2016

The Accident

The Accident


 There was a boy named Denham who lived in Cable Bay Block Road He loved to play video games and ride his bike.

A few Months later...

 Denham went to go ride on his bike because he hasn't rid it in ages Denham was riding with one of his neighbors named Jordan and Denhams cousin Maya.


 Jordan asked Denham "if he wanted to race down the hill" Denham said "sure"  Then he was walking up the hill it took him a couple seconds to get up By the time he got up he said he was gonna ride on the slippery area. 

They were ready they both were zooming like a car rolling down a hill what got shot by a rocket launcher.

Denham was near the end but he was not wearing a helmet and the brakes weren't working.

 There were to many bumps there wasn't really any options left.

 Swoosh Crank Bang!!!!! he did a forward flip near the ground he lost his his grip because  his hands were sweaty in fear that he wasn't gonna land then he fell off head first he had blood all over his face then he graced his elbow and then shoulder he got up he was crying.

 Jordan slowed down he said he was gonna yell out to my mum. I heard the door open I looked up crying I saw my mums face she was me back home Jordan brang my bike back Maya came with us to. 


1 comment:

  1. I especially love the action scene Denham. It was really exciting... and scary too!

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